For those of you who missed the assignment

Here are the questions for the peer review so that you can complete the peer review and the draft.
1. Does the intro engage the reader?
2. Indicate where the main point of the story is located.
3. What does the reader learn or gain from reading this memoir?
4. Indicate where a sentence or paragraph uses dialog effectively.
5. Name a part of the excerpt where the author uses exposition. How is it effective?
6. What particular event or sentence do you like about this paragraph?
7. Are there particular words or phrases that are redundant?
8. Where should the writer describe in more detail? Where is the writer showing/creating a visual scene for the reader to walk into?
9. If you had one suggestion for improvement, what would it be?

My suggestion would be to e-maiil a friend this list of questions and a link to your blog, and request that they give you feedback. That will help you complete the memo assignment and draft.
If you missed the assignment, you won't get credit for the review, but you will proably find it difficult to do the memo otherwise.